Help!!!! SONG LYRICS I WROTE...NEED SOMEONES OPINION!?

that was gorgeous(: if it's meant to be a song, you might want to set a chorus, but it's all a matter of opinion. either way, i can really relate to how you're feeling in the song. i love the line "I picked up my worn out Bible today, flipped through the pages to the verse where you said you would always stay." great job, keep up the work(: <3